You are going to teach English to your friend’s child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child; say when and where you will teach the child; explain what books you would like to borrow

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Dear Mrs Robinson, I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing

this

letter to borrow some

English

books for teaching my friend's child. Actually, his name is Robert, and he is 10 years old. He is currently studying in pre-secondary school, and he is facing a problem with grammar. my friend requested me to teach his child because his exams are coming next month.

Hence

, you were my great

English

teacher, and you have various

English

course material books, which could be beneficial for me to teach him. I am planning to teach him next week, my exams are finishing

this

week. I decided with my friend that my house would be the best place to study, as I am living alone in my house. I would be grateful if you could send me some basic

English

Grammer books

at the end

this

week. I look forward to waiting for your response as soon as possible Yours faithfully, Amandeep Kaur

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