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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Somepeople believe that it is too late to do something while others believe that actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both the perspectives and give your opinion.

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The controversial lack of trek is not lacking in our modern society.It is true that movement means a lot to the crowd in our contemporary world.Today,the growing demand for tours
due to
 globalization emphasizes its importance.
This
 issue of travel is important for some communities, but not important for others ,it is left to their own personal opinions.The problem of our modern society is still those who think negatively about the ride On the one hand,there may be some controversy that believes it will benefit mankind.
Furthermore
,the existence of populations in some parts of the world,as some claim,proves that sailing is not important .One of the main reasons for
this
.For ,example gallant believes that if folk's ability to work increases,our potential to develop everything will
also
 increase.
This
 idealistic view is not very attractive,but it is difficult to assess whether it is actually true.
On the other hand
,daring agree that we have several options in terms of alternatives.First,flying is very important for me.Because audacious believe that excursion is interesting not only for me but for everyone.Short experience shows that when we have to learn about it,it is important to apply what we have learned in sightseeing In conclusion .There is no doubt that.When everything is taken into consideration.With the aforementioned reasons for excursion bold indeed believe it is very important for a nation.
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