Recently you noticed that the waste (garbage) disposal in your area is creating problems. Write a letter complaining about the situation to the environment officer. * The time of waste pickup. * What is the problem with the waste. * Suggest solution to the problem.

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Dear Mr. Thommes, I am writing to inform an issue regarding garbage disposal in the area where I live. There are several problems with the inconvenience of the waste pickup , which results in an adverse impact on health.
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, I want to bring attention to the pickup time of waste. I have noticed that there is no regular time to pick up the garbage
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sometimes it is early
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whereas
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on some days it is late compared to the usual time.
Due to
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this
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issue, we need to keep disposal into own home, which results in a bad odour and an increase in attracting vermin. I would recommend a solution to
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problem is getting notified before 30 mins on arrival.
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helps us not only in kepping clean neighbourhood but
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will it reduce to chance of getting health diseases. Another piece of advice is that there should be a pest control facility bi-weekly to decrease the growth of bugs. I would appreciate it if you address
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issue as soon as possible and implement the recommendation given. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Taylor

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Write 'I am writing to inform you about an issue' for a more correct start.
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Say the waste pick-up time more clearly and give one clear example.
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Use simple linking words like 'First', 'Also', and 'Finally'.
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Keep one main idea in each paragraph.
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Check small grammar and word form mistakes because they make meaning less clear.
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You answered all three parts of the task.
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Your letter has a clear opening and ending.
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Your ideas are easy to follow in most parts.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste disposal
  • garbage collection
  • environmental impact
  • health hazards
  • vermin
  • recycling guidelines
  • community awareness
  • pickup schedule
  • odors
  • visual impact
  • frequency of waste collection
  • local wildlife
  • stricter guidelines
  • residents
  • predictable
  • effectively
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