The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
This
graph indicates Linking Words
that
how many Correct word choice
apply
shops
are closed and opened in a nation between 2011 and 2018. Use synonyms
Overall
, there Linking Words
are
a fluctuation in both closures and openings, especially the Change the verb form
is
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that closed from 2011 to 2018.
In terms of openings of the markets between 2011 to 2018, dramatically decreased from 8500 in 2011 to 4000 in 2012. But from 2012 to 2013, back Use synonyms
to
successfully increased by 2100 Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
then
reached 6100. In 2015, it fell from 6100 to 4000, which was the same as Correct word choice
and then
a
year 2012 . Change the article
the
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Also
the Add a comma
,Also
number
was Use synonyms
being
maintained that Unnecessary verb
apply
previous
Correct article usage
the previous
number
in 2016 as well. In 2017, it slightly rose up by around 100, Use synonyms
however
in 2018, it fell to 3000.
Linking Words
About
the data Change preposition
Regarding
of
the Change preposition
on
number
of closures of Use synonyms
shops
in those years, there Use synonyms
was
ups and downs happened between 2011 and 2014. The measurements of its Correct subject-verb agreement
were
number
fluctuated within 1000 and Use synonyms
had
peaked Unnecessary verb
apply
around
7100 in 2013. Change preposition
at around
Also
, a huge fall Linking Words
of
closures' Change preposition
in
number
occurred in 2015, which was reached to 500. In 2016, it raised back to 5100, but since 2016, it Use synonyms
downs
by 100 and ups by 100 in 2018 eventually.
Replace the word
down
To sum up
, Linking Words
although
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that opened was highly reached 8500 in 2011, but altered to 3000, the lowest Use synonyms
number
in 2018. Use synonyms
Whereas
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that became no more available has ups and downs from 2011 to 2014, Use synonyms
but
since 2014, it drastically diminished in 2015, from about 6500 to only 500.Correct word choice
apply
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