The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram details the process by which leather products are made for retail. Looking from an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that there are 3 main steps to
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entirely man-made process beginning with
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the initial
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transportation of the raw material to the
factory
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, followed by
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the preparation
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and processing of the material, and
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the production of consumer products.
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, the leather skins from various animals are dried. Subsequent to
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, they are taken to a
factory
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by truck where they are washed in water and lime. The skins are
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soaked in more lime for a period of time before being run through a machine with large rollers that flattens them out.
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the flattened skins are soaked in tannin, which is composed of water and vegetable matter. They are
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polished by another rolling device and taken to another
factory
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by trucks. In
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factory
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, the final products are crafted and available to consumer shops.
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