The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram details the process by which leather products are made for retail. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that there are 3 main steps to Linking Words
this
entirely man-made process beginning with Linking Words
initial
transportation of the raw material to the Correct article usage
the initial
factory
, followed by Use synonyms
preparation
and processing of the material, and Correct article usage
the preparation
finally
the production of consumer products.
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Firstly
, the leather skins from various animals are dried. Subsequent to Linking Words
this
, they are taken to a Linking Words
factory
by truck where they are washed in water and lime. The skins are Use synonyms
then
soaked in more lime for a period of time before being run through a machine with large rollers that flattens them out.
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Next,
the flattened skins are soaked in tannin, which is composed of water and vegetable matter. They are Linking Words
then
polished by another rolling device and taken to another Linking Words
factory
by trucks. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
factory
, the final products are crafted and available to consumer shops.Use synonyms
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