Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that the majority of the

people

already

forgot

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the original values of the religious

festivals

and prefer to enjoy them in their own ways

instead

of celebrating them traditionally. I would argue that they are doing it

due to

busier schedules from work and authorities limiting the timing and resources to celebrate some famous

festivals

. To commence with the views of disagreement that few humans are still connected with their ground traditions and perform the

festivals

according to

their religious norms.

In other words

,

people

wait eagerly for the festival and

while

celebrating it, they

use to

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tell their children about how

this

particular festival started and reasons to celebrate it.

Consequently

, believe

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religious beliefs from one generation to

next

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However

, in

this

modern world, individuals are becoming so busy that they hardly get

time

for themselves resulting

to ignore

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the importance of

festivals

. They are working five or six days a week, leaving less

time

to spend with friends and family. In order to go for the outings, they use festival holidays as a bonus and go outside for

get together

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get-togethers

.

For instance

, a state survey has found that on the holiday of the Lohri festival in Punjab, 9 out of 10 individuals prefer to go shopping

instead

of celebrating it at home.

Thus

, being disconnected from the religious meaning of tradition.

Further

strengthening the view, the Government has imposed limitations on the

time

and resources to celebrate some huge

festivals

due to

which

people

are losing interest

to celebrate

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them. Diwali is a very famous festival in India. Being a festival of lights and sweets,

people

use to explode crackers and distribute sweets among friends and relatives. But the Government has limited the

time

to celebrate it from 6 p.mto 8 p.m and

also

banned the formation of crackers in order to save the environment from pollution which led the

people

to lose interest

to celebrate

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it. In conclusion, despite some

people

managing to celebrate traditional

festivals

following norms and beliefs, most of them prefer to go for small trips on holidays to enjoy themselves

instead

of celebrating at home.