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Many young people move to cities and towns from the countryside leaving only old people there. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve the situation?

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Nowadays the majority of young
people
 are moving from rural areas to urban areas in search of better
education
 and
job
opportunities
 leaving their old parents behind.
This
 can lead to a number of
problems
, namely no young
people
 who work in the
countryside
 and there are no
people
 to take care of seniors. In my opinion, these
problems
 can be solved with the help of the
government
.
Firstly
, most of the time in the
countryside
 there is a lack of
job
opportunities
 or no
job
 at all for young
people
 which is why they prefer to leave their homes in search of something better. In the
cities
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 they can find a good university that will give them a better
education
 and in the future they have a high chance of getting a well-paid
job
. Unfortunately, that causes several issues and one of them is there are no young
people
 who
works
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work
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 in the
countryside
 so nothing develops and there are fewer workplaces. Another problem is that there are no
people
 to take care of seniors when they need
this
 support the most. These
problems
 can be solved if the
government
 will put (
pay
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) more attention to
this
 topic.One of the things they must do is create a better
education
 system so
people
 don't have to leave their homes for that.
Furthermore
,the
government
also
 should try to help develop
job
opportunities
 in those areas so
even
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that even
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 after
youth
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the youth
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 will get
education
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an education
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 they will have
motivation
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the motivation
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 to stay home because they will have
opportunities
 to get a good
job
.
Thats
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That
 will solve the problem with seniors because
then
 they will have help and
people
 who will take care of them.
To conclude
,a lot of young
people
 are moving away from their hometown leaving their parents alone without help and there are no
people
 to work in the
countryside
. To tackle these
problems
, educational institutions (and more
job
opportunities
) should be created by the
government
 and more
job
opportunities
.
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