The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts over 10 years in Calgary, the cases of 3 Bakeries concerning the yearly income. From an
overall
perspective, the years taken into consideration start from 2000 to end up with the period of time of 2010.
Additionally
, as has been already mentioned, the bakeries in
this
task are 3, namely Amandine Bakery, Mari Bakeshop and Bob Cakery.
To begin
with the first 12 months of 2000, it's evident that the highest percentage of 8000$ is for the case of Mari Bakeshop,
while
the lowest of 2000$ is shown for Bolo Cakery. During 5 years time, the diagram will continue to have the second shop always on top of the position, the Bolo as rearmost and Amandine in the middle income of 6000$.
On the other hand
, after a long term, the situations start to change, inverting most of the cases.
For instance
, the process of Mari will be dropped becoming the
last
one
,
whereas
both Bolo and Amandine will increase their fractions by 2000$ for the first bakers and 2100$ for the next
one
.
To sum up
, with what has been already mentioned, it's crucial to highlight that over 10 stages evident progress is illustrated by two of the places, whilst the other
one
is the only
one
which will suffer a decrease by 4000$.
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