Many people believe that social networking sites have huge negative effects on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Recently , social
network
sites
popularity has been increasing all over the world and these provide some options
such
as communication. Clearly , in
this
century social
network
sites
have a huge area of our lives. Yet , there is some disagreement as to whether these
sites
have positive effects on people or not .
While
there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary , I personally believe that these applications have benefits for our lives. The reasons to support my view are as follows. First of all,it is an undeniable fact that social
sites
supply a huge advantage in keeping up with friends and it is
also
purpose for a variety of communication. Obviously , when we can use social
sites
such
as Instagram, we can share lots of things with our environment including our friends , family members and so on .
For instance
, After we share a photo or story on Instagram, my friends can see where ı am now or what ı am doing right now . Equally important , though, these
sites
propose some job opportunities
such
as influencer and media manager .
That is
to say , social
network
sites
aim for helpful development in people's lives and their life quality to earn money . Take American tiktokers ,
for example
, when these tiktokers share some video on our for you page , they will make money for each watching and if
this
video reaches high watching , they will reach overrun money .
To sum up
, I once again restate my view that social
network
sites
is a positive impact on our life and someone who has a job from these
sites
can make their own life-winning goals . My belief , these
sites
' advantages outweigh the disadvantages .
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