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The two maps provided show an illustration of an island, before and after the manufacture of several installations for tourists visiting the area.

The two maps provided show an illustration of an island, before and after the manufacture of several installations for tourists visiting the area.
The two maps provided show an illustration of an island, before and after the manufacture of several installations for tourists visiting the area.
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, it can be clearly seen that the location had a number of alterations which indubitably led to a great improvement. From an uninhabited
locality
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 it
transformated
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transformed
 into a lively region. By taking a look at the first picture, it is
noticable
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noticeable
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 that there were only a few palms all around the territory. The sea was encircling the isle and the beach was provided at the west side of the locale. Now turning to the second image, an overwhelming amount of facilities are to be observed.
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plenty of newly constructed accommodations appeared.
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, the reception was assembled in the middle of the district,
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 the restaurant for
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public utilization. A couple of boats with a bridge are
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 viewed at the pier.

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