The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes

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for 2035 As it can be seen Wales showed the highest results increasing to nearly 16

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. As opposed to it, Northern Ireland demonstrated the lowest percentage of

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over 65 in the past.

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it is easily

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that England has almost the same quantity of

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UK which is 15

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lower bar belongs to Scotland. Looking at the

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, we can clearly notice that in the future Wales will remain

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a country with the biggest quantity of

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aged 65. And Scotland will take

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second place, hitting 25

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. England, Northern Ireland and the UK will take the same position scoring 22-23

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for each. In general, the graph gives the predictions that the

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of old

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will only get higher year by year.