Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

The latest study has shown that most of the lawbreakers who are imprisoned engage in illegal activities after they returned to society. In

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will discuss several reasons why offenders re-commit in crime and possible solutions to tackle

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issue. The major contributing factor to the criminalities that occur today is that people find it difficult to get jobs, which causes a high unemployment rate.

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those who have been in jail for criminal traces

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a lack of skills or even people not giving them the same rights because of trust issues.

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, they could only survive by committing more crimes.

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has been rooted in

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social or personal nature.

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, people who were raised in a family that committed crimes for a living, so they

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got used to it.

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, the punishment has no effect on them.

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the causes, the authority should take

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to minimize the recurrence of crime.

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, the government should provide skills development programs for prisoners,

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as cooking and farming training, which are useful for

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survival.

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, even if they did not get a job, they might still start the business using their skills.

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, authorities

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have to focus more on providing good rehabilitation and therapy programs to prepare them to be able to adapt and follow the norms that exist in society. In conclusion, with many factors that can lead criminals to re-offend,

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as their social situation and economic problems, the government must provide any program to prepare them to survive after they are released. I would hope

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solution can reduce the potential for crime.