The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

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The maps illustrate the developments which occurred between 1990 and 2005 at the seaside resort of Templeton. In 1990, the seaside resort was much more greener, with a lot of trees and houses,

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, during the

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fifteen years, the resort has changed dramatically. The most significant is that trees and residential areas had

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down and were rebuilt into multi-storey buildings. By 2005, there had been significant changes in construction like

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to the west of the railway station,

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a large supermarket was built to the south of the lake . North-west of the school had built an airport .

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major development was a ferry crossing ,

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a continuation of the railway route to the west.

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flats sprang up around the supermarket and lake.

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, a comparison of the two maps shows the change from a simple town to a developed city

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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“The young generation of teenagers is less well behaved than the previous generations of teenagers.” Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon?