The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005
The maps illustrate the developments which occurred between 1990 and 2005 at the seaside resort of Templeton. In 1990, the seaside resort was much more greener, with a lot of trees and houses,
however
, during the
last
fifteen years, the resort has changed dramatically. The most significant is that trees and residential areas had
knocked
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down and were rebuilt into multi-storey buildings. By 2005, there had been significant changes in construction like
factory
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which
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had
constructed
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to the west of the railway station,
also
a large supermarket was built to the south of the lake . North-west of the school had built an airport .
Additionally
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major development was a ferry crossing ,
also
a continuation of the railway route to the west.
Moreover
,
the
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block of
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flats sprang up around the supermarket and lake.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps shows the change from a simple town to a developed city
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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