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The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005. (percentage)

The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005. (percentage)
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The given line graph illustrates the comparison of the proportion of
car
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 ownership in the United Kingdom for 30 years. In brief, the ratio of 2 and 3
car
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 owners slightly increased from 1975 to 2005,
whereas
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 the percentage of people who have
one
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car
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 fluctuated, and there was a considerable fall in the rate of individuals who have no
car
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.
Additionally
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, the proportion of
one
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car
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 owner remains higher than the other over
this
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 time frame. Moving to the details, in 1975 the largest proportion was occupied by
one
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car
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 at 45%, whilst the figure for no cars was subtly lower, at approximately 42
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cent. After that, both gradually decreased to 38% and 25% respectively between 1975 and 1985.
Following
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this
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, the figure for
one
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car
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 went up to the same rate in 1975 from 1985 to 2005,
while
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 there was a slight drop in the ratio of no
car
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 to 23% in 2005.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of 2 and 3
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car
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 showed a similar trend, with both subtly inclined from 7% to 18% for the former and from 3% to 9% for the latter.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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