Some People believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people in the world believe that highly talented

workers

like

teachers

and

doctors

ought to have respectful salaries than renowned personalities and athletes. Personally, I believe that

workers

such

as

doctors

and

teachers

should be paid more than others, I feel

this

way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. I firmly believe that

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nowadays we have a lack of

workers

in the health sector and education,and a wide range of postgraduates looking for other jobs or creating their own companies,

then

working

such

as

doctors

or

teachers

. Because in those fields only a low

salary

and long hours work.

In addition

, professional

workers

should have high salaries with fewer hours of work,

due to

the effort they do.

For example

, my father is a teacher, he taught student physics.

therefore

, he gives them as much knowledge as he can, he works from 8:00 to 12:00 and 2:00 to 6:00 all weeks exept weekends, but he paid only 2000 usd per month,

While

sports personal and celebrities paid thousand of dollars per month. Neverthless,

teachers

and

doctors

have a wide effect on society, so shoud to have high

salary

. As a conseqence, the entertainment and sports personalities

also

have their effect on the nation, but in other side

such

as leisure.

for example

my brother play football with famous team in the uk, his

salary

is really high that make him to buy luxure car with big house and run business only on one year,

while

the professional

workers

have a positive touch on the government and socity, they still stuck in renting flat. In conclusion, Personally, the professional

workers

as

teachers

and

doctors

should have have high

salary

and paid for every extra hours. Because, they have a positive effect widely. I strongly believe that point are supporting my response.