Some People believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people in the world believe that highly talented

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like

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and

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ought to have respectful salaries than renowned personalities and athletes. Personally, I believe that

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and

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should be paid more than others, I feel

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way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. I firmly believe that

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nowadays we have a lack of

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in the health sector and education,and a wide range of postgraduates looking for other jobs or creating their own companies,

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working

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as

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or

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. Because in those fields only a low

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and long hours work.

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, professional

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should have high salaries with fewer hours of work,

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the effort they do.

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, my father is a teacher, he taught student physics.

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, he gives them as much knowledge as he can, he works from 8:00 to 12:00 and 2:00 to 6:00 all weeks exept weekends, but he paid only 2000 usd per month,

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sports personal and celebrities paid thousand of dollars per month. Neverthless,

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and

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have a wide effect on society, so shoud to have high

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. As a conseqence, the entertainment and sports personalities

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have their effect on the nation, but in other side

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as leisure.

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my brother play football with famous team in the uk, his

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is really high that make him to buy luxure car with big house and run business only on one year,

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the professional

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have a positive touch on the government and socity, they still stuck in renting flat. In conclusion, Personally, the professional

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as

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and

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should have have high

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and paid for every extra hours. Because, they have a positive effect widely. I strongly believe that point are supporting my response.