You are living in a university residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the high amount of noise coming from the

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restaurant on campus.

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all of the students are pleased with the facility,

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, it causes a huge amount of noise late at night which is annoying for all of us.

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dining causes us lots of serious problems. First of all,

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huge loud sound causes sleep disturbance. So, we cannot sleep properly and feel exhausted and sleepy at our next morning classes.

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issue affects our progress at university.

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, we cannot concentrate on our lessons during our final exams.

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, we are afraid to fail our exams. I would like to propose whether is it possible for authorities to ban the opening time of the dining to 10 P.M and let the restaurant be open late at the weekends only.

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, the authorities can put up some signs which remind the customers to considerate and keep lowering their noise. I am extremely grateful for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Khashayar Partovi

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structure

To boost your score, ensure your letter has a clear structure. Introduce your issue, explain its impact, and then propose solutions. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea.

greeting and closing

Work on the greeting and closing of your letter. Use more formal and appropriate salutations, e.g., 'Dear Governor Smith' and a formal closing phrase like 'Yours sincerely,' followed by your full name.

task response

For an even higher score in task response, discuss the issue and its implications in greater detail. Include examples or more precise descriptions of how the noise affects you and your peers. This can make your argument stronger and more persuasive.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

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