The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The chart given depicts the outlay of the five customer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras) from two different countries (
France
and the United Kingdom) in 2010. Units are measured in pound sterling.
Overall
, cars, books and cameras were the most popular consumed in the
UK
compared to computers and perfume used in
France
. Turning to the detail it is evident that, generally consumers in the
UK
were far bigger spending 450,000
pounds
on cars than in
France
just only 400,000 ,
Likewise
approximately 400,000
pounds
was the expenditure on books in the
UK
which had a difference of about 100,000
pounds
if compared to
France
.
Additionally
spending on cameras in
France
was over half of the
UK
which only expenditures 350,000
pounds
.
On the other hand
outlay for computers in the
UK
(350,000)
pounds
was far less than in
France
just only about 360,000
pounds
,
while
parfum was the less expenditure for both of those countries.
France
was spending about 200,000
pounds
and the
UK
just under 150
pounds
.
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