The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart below illustrates some changes in the percentage of
people
who were born in Australia
and who were born outside of Australia
living in urban,rural and towns between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
,The bar chart shows the number of people
who were born in Australia
and who were born outside of Australia
so much more than others from 1995 to 2010,and the bar chart describes that these people
were born in cities
(with brown colour).
The people
who were born in Australian cities
was exactly 50, the town was 20(with light green colour) and rural areas were 30(with blue colour),and the people
who were born outside of Australian,cities
increased from 40 to 60 however
the town was a decrease from 20 to 10 and rural areas also
raise from 30 to 40 in the year of 1995.,However
in ,2010 only the people
were born in Australia
and out of Australia
dramatically growth from 65 to 80 in cities
.Town and rural was dramatically drop.Submitted by Ayan on
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