The visuals give information about the number of spacecrafts launched by various national governments between 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission. Write a report for a university lecturer summarising the most important information in the visuals.

The pie chart
provide
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provides
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data regarding the
number
of
spacecrafts
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spacecraft
launched by different nations and
bar
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the bar
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graph indicates the
percentage wise
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percentage-wise
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distribution of
spacecrafts
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spacecraft
depending on their purpose from 1957 to 2007.
Overall
, Russia launched
highest
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the highest
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number
of
shuttles
,
while
USA
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the USA
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made the least
number
of contributions
in
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to
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the
missions
. Meanwhile, most
percentage
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percentages
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of
spacecrafts
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spacecraft
were sent for communications;
however
, the least common
percentage
of
space
shuttles
were used for planetary explorations. Russia, which was the uncontested leader, launched 3484
spacecrafts
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spacecraft
which was the highest figure in the chart.
Nevertheless
, not only India
,
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but
also
Canada was left far behind as they had sent only 48 and 28 missiles respectively which were the s the lowest numbers of
space
shuttles
. The USA had sent out a significant
number
of
missions
numbering around 1760 which was a little more than half of the
missions
sent by Russia.
Also
, the third highest
number
of
space
crafts which were launched by
the
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commercial agencies
,
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was just around the double of 285
space
shuttles
sent by
European
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the European
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union
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Union
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.
Also
, the
missions
sent by others were 214 which was just around 225 that was the total /cumulative
number
of
missions
sent by Japan and China together. Meanwhile, communication was the primary goal/objective of around 27
percent
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of these rockets, thereby being ahead of surveillance which was the aim of 18
percent
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per cent
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of
missions
.
However
, /
Nonetheless
, /
Nevertheless
, /Having said
this
, other tasks,
such
as manned
space
program
that
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,
weather
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and weather
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observations, which comprised of ……………………. were the least common/ popular objectives for the
missions
. The
percentage
of
missions
with the objective or purpose of planetary exploration was the least common at 5
percent
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per cent
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.
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