The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given charts illustrate the reasons why MBA graduates chose their degrees
as well as
the skill required in order to get a job .
Overall
, it is evident that what employers value has a fairly equal distribution , on the other hand
, the motives for getting an MBA has more variation .
To begin
with , the most driving factor leading one to pursue an MBA was better job opportunities with almost more than half of voters choosing it , additionally
, personal development and excelling in their career made up about 30% of all responses , finally
, only a small amount of 8% studied for the intention of helping others .
Second , what those offering jobs were seeking had a quite simple share , with both experience and personality making up 50% equally shared between both , moreover
, the rest of the skills made the remaining 50% with the least sought for being qualifications at only 10% .Submitted by ahmadzm2004 on
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