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some people believe that technology has make our lives more convenient while others argue that it has negetive effects on indiviuals and society. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
technology
 becomes one of the inseparable parts of humankind. During
this
 revolutionary advancement, many people believe that
technology
 may make some problems with isolation and changing the base of communications and relationships.
However
, the others believe that
,
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 cutting-edge
technology
 makes
life
 easier and more comfortable. On
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one hand, by improving
technology
 in our
life
 the base of communications and relationships have damaged. Nowadays, people's attention is on technological devices, like cell phones, laptops and etc.
While
 they are busy with their devices they may lose physical communication with each other. And in future, they will encounter serious problems like isolation.
On the other hand
, digital transformation has the ability to access and connect easily. It means that
,
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 you can work with
foreigner
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foreigners
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 or you can stay in touch with your friends and families who live in another city or country.
In addition
,
technology
 has
beneficial
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 impact on studying and researching. Via,
technology
 students can access easily to different resources for studying. In conclusion,
technology
 is
double-edged
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 sword. In my opinion,
technology
 gives us a wide range of opportunities that makes our
life
 convenient.
Although
, we should be aware that
technology
 should not handle everything in our
life
. Because it causes
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we will miss the chance of
life
 experiences.
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