Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that in the modern world, some specific variants of

plants

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and

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are going to

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and

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is a major environmental drawback.

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, there is another thought which discusses other more crucial environmental challenges. In my opinion, the lack of variety of special

plants

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and

animals

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could have negative consequences on our

life

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. It can affect the ecosystem circle and interrupt the lives of other variants

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as insects,

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, and

animals

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. If some

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and

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diminish, the growth of others will be negatively influenced. Another dilemma caused by the loss of particular kinds of

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and

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is about

food

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supply for human needs. I mean, we manage to provide enough

food

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for sustaining from any reliable sources.

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, any disruption in the existence of

animals

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and

plants

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might influence our ability to meet our challenges about

food

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.

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, were grain crops to decline, a considerable amount of human

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demand would not be met and

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supply would be a tremendous challenge. Despite the fact that the loss of some

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and

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must be taken into account, other kinds of environmental drawbacks

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as the accumulation of greenhouse gas resulting from human activities and water or air pollution are of paramount importance and should not be ignored. I think above mentioned environmental crisis must be prioritized by the government to figure them out and prevent the environment

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into a pattern of degradation. In conclusion,

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saving specific

animals

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and

plants

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are

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essential to planet survival, considering the other threatening factors associated with our ecosystem is vital.