Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that in the modern world, some specific variants of

plants

and

animals

are going to

be disappeared

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and

this

is a major environmental drawback.

However

, there is another thought which discusses other more crucial environmental challenges. In my opinion, the lack of variety of special

plants

and

animals

could have negative consequences on our

life

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. It can affect the ecosystem circle and interrupt the lives of other variants

such

as insects,

plants

, and

animals

. If some

plants

and

animals

diminish, the growth of others will be negatively influenced. Another dilemma caused by the loss of particular kinds of

animals

and

plants

is about

food

supply for human needs. I mean, we manage to provide enough

food

for sustaining from any reliable sources.

Therefore

, any disruption in the existence of

animals

and

plants

might influence our ability to meet our challenges about

food

.

For instance

, were grain crops to decline, a considerable amount of human

food

demand would not be met and

consequently

food

supply would be a tremendous challenge. Despite the fact that the loss of some

animals

and

plants

must be taken into account, other kinds of environmental drawbacks

such

as the accumulation of greenhouse gas resulting from human activities and water or air pollution are of paramount importance and should not be ignored. I think above mentioned environmental crisis must be prioritized by the government to figure them out and prevent the environment

to fall

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into a pattern of degradation. In conclusion,

while

saving specific

animals

and

plants

are

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is

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essential to planet survival, considering the other threatening factors associated with our ecosystem is vital.