Cultures around the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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in the world are becoming more comparable. In my opinion from
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different
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are mixed
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of social media.
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culture
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. There are many countries in the world
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they have different
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and traditions. these
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and traditions have evolved since ancient times and should not
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. But representatives of one
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can learn from other
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through several sources,
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videos
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and others
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aspect of
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many people attached social media
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and
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them. All nations do not forget their own history and
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because of
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. All nations have their art, music and food abilities to spread it.
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to spread it to others and they are doing
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through
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the internet
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internet
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. Latest searches show that if people forget
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the borders
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of
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they can dramatically decrease
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of
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the country
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of
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which
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is forgotten if people who live in
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a country
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which
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own
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used
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to other
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they
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habits, dancing and religion. Now
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the spread of many
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which is terrible many
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have become more similar In
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all
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must not be changed because if
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are changed our
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habits
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and extinction #sardor_28
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  • Cultural exchange
  • Homogenization
  • Multinational companies
  • Cultural elements
  • Dissemination
  • Social media platforms
  • International tourism
  • Cultural norms
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  • Modernization
  • Convergence
  • Cultural blending
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