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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism industry.

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For decades, travelling to a diversity of places is being increased among nations all around the world. It means local people can enhance their
chance
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 of gaining money from the tourism
industry
.
However
, what are the benefits of
this
 situation, and what are the drawbacks?In
this
 essay, I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions. On the one hand, the majority of people deem that holiday-makers are inclined to spend their spare time in foreign territory by way of heading to shopping malls where they could purchase treats for themselves or having a delicious meal in a local restaurant
along with
 joining entertainment activities
such
 as bungee jumping;
therefore
, they have the main role in the increase of a country's wealth
subsequently
.As proven by statistics, in Antalya_Turkey, over seventy per cent of its fortune is bonded to peak seasons when It swarms with tourists, and
thus
, the tourism
industry
 gives rise to Turkey's profit.
On the other hand
, there is an exceedingly increasing number of folks who explain the negative consequences of
this
industry
 like the amount of air, garbage and noise pollution and so on;
moreover
, if a small touristic area is swarmed with millions of travellers, it would deteriorate the condition of contamination.
For instance
, the north of Astara_Iran, a green city which has been full of trash
as a result
 of holiday-makers who head to that city on weekends, and
hence
, tourists never pay enough attention to do not drop letters on roads so everywhere is full of garbage
consequently
due to
 their carelessness. In conclusion,
although
 the tourism
industry
 gives a helping hand to make local communities affluent, most beautiful touristic zones are destroyed by wanderers' thoughtlessness. Personally, in my opinion, the benefits in terms will outweigh any negatives
accordingly
.
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