The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts depicted an electrical appliances
percentage
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of
households
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,
as well as
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it
also
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illustrated the amount of time consumed doing housework per week in
households
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.
Overall
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, the first graph shows electrical appliances namely washing machines, refrigerators, and
vacuum
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cleaner usage from 1920 to 2019.
While
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in the second chart, it is defined how much amount of time spent by people per week doing their housework from 1920 to 2019. At the start of 1920, the adoption of an electronic machine began. It is seen that the refrigerator has a significantly low amount of
percentage
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which is nearly 4% in the contract the other two appliances which are the washing machine and
vacuum
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cleaner had a higher adoption rate around 40 and 30 per cent respectively.
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after 20 years the
percentage
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of refrigerators dramatically increase above 50%
while
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the washing machines and
vacuum
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cleaners had marginal increases around 60 and 50 per cent.
Moreover
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, in 1960
vacuum
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cleaner consumption surpass washing machine usage in
households
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.
However
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, it is clearly seen that from 2000 onwards refrigerators and
vacuum
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cleaners dominate household work by 100% till 2019. In the other chart, it is observed that the use of electrical products has significantly dropped the number of hours spent on
households
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per week from 1920 to 1960 by 50% to 20%.
Thereafter
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, the
percentage
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is modestly reduced from 1960 onwards to 2019 by hardly 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, vacuum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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