Increase the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. Do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Growing

traffic

and

pollutions

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pollution

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problems

is

such

a thing that we have to solve because it can really

give

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cause

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a

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massive damage

for

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to

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the

world

. Increasing the price of

petrol

is the best way to solve the

problems

. For the start, I agree

if

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that

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increasing the price of

petrol

can be a solution to solve growing

traffic

and

pollutions

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pollution

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in the

world

, when

petrol

can be

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is

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more expensive, people will

be thinking

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think

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twice

to buy

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about buying

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petrol

if they

thinking

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about the price and start to think the other way if they want to go outside or just go to work. For

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example, people go to work using their own vehicle

instead

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of using

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the

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public transportation. So, the solution for the

traffic

I think is by using public transportation

such

a

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as a

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bus, train, or maybe just using

bike

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and it can

be reduced

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reduce

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the growing

traffic

.

Secondly

, I think growing

traffic

create

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creates

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more

pollutions

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pollution

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, and that

effect

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affects

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to

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apply

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the

world

. Global warming issues

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not a joke, many things

happened

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will happen

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if we can’t reduce the

pollutions

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pollution

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of

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apply

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traffic

. For

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example,

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global warming

increase

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makes

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the earth

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earth

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Earth

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weather much hotter. The

world

needed solutions

for

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to

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the

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its

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problems

. By reducing the

traffic

, the effect can be more significant for the

world

because it

created

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creates

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less

pollutions

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pollution

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for

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global warming.

For

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In

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conclusion, many people will

be disagreed

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disagree

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with my opinion because

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petrol

is needed for the

world

for many things.

However

, we can change that time by time, there’s always a solution for all

problems

including growing

traffic

and

pollutions

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pollution

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. Maybe in the

future

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future,

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we can use

the

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electric

vehicle

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vehicles

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and

use

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apply

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the

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public transportation

for creating

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to create

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better environmental health.