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Living in a house is more advantageous than living in an apartment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#house #apartment
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There have been numerous discussions as to which type of habitation is more beneficial . Both the whole Buildings and flat habitation are dwelling units of their kind. I,
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, believe that an inn is more beneficial than quarters. (
This
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 essay will be pinpointing the extent to which I agree or disagree).
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 with, most people prefer to buy or rent a whole building than a flat majorly because of its privacy. There is nothing like having
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's privacy to
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's self and that feeling of wanting to bring in personal belongings with no next-door neighbour asking a series of questions about what is brought into
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's home is a plus.
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, parking
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's vehicle at any point at will is another solved puzzle when living in a house.
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, I currently live in a whole building in Abeokuta, Ogun State, Nigeria,where no
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 questions me about what I have in my vehicle. I park my vehicle anywhere in my compound,and I come in and go out at will with my personal belongings. If it were to be in quarters, the reverse would have been the case.
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, residents living in a mansion need not share
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. For residents living in a cabin, sharing
amenities
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 might be a serious issue if
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 has an unfriendly neighbour.
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, the next building to my mum's house is a block of flats where
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 are been shared. Whenever it's that time of the month when bills are paid, it's always argument here and there especially when a particular bill increases. In conclusion,
it is clear that
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 it is better to live in a building where there is privacy and personal
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.
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 gives
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 mental satisfaction
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 of thinking about how to dodge things into
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's apartment.
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, in a situation where neighbours live as families and share like minds,
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 might enjoy living in quarters.
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