Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

In recent years, part-time has become a trend in
students
who study at University.
However
, getting jobs when learning at school has several positive aspects, but it still
exist
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many
limitation
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limitations
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. On the one hand, there are
number
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a number
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of advantages of taking a
job
.
Firstly
, we can earn money from a
job
to pay tuition fees or living expenses.
It
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appropriate for freshman who studies in
the
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their
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first year at University as they
has
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a
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apply
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space time
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, which can support a part of
cost
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the cost
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for their parents.
For instance
,
beside
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study hours,
students
can apply
part-time
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for part-time
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jobs,
such
as waitress and receptionist, which
does
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not require professional qualifications or certifications.
Secondly
, doing part-time work allows
students
not only to gain experience in their field but
also
to become familiar with the work environment.
This
means that when the
students
graduate and join a company, they will feel comfortable and confident in their workplace.
On the other hand
, there are several positive
aspect
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of the above-mentioned point. In fact,
students
who engage in part-time jobs occasionally lose
concentrate
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concentration
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on their studies, which can directly affect their academic achievements.
For example
,
students
might feel bored with studying and often dropping out of college.
In addition
,
students
who engage in both working and studying can harm
in
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apply
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their health leading to consequences. To illustrate, if
freshman
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freshmen
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who
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apply
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spent
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much time
for
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at
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work, they would
more
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be more
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susceptible to damaged diseases. In conclusion, given the clear advantages
taking
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of taking
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a
job
when
students
are in school
have
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apply
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, there are still limitations.
Therefore
freshman
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freshmen
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should carefully consider before applying for a
job
.
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