The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produces electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produces electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the various stages involved in using cold
water
for electricity production.
Overall
, it can be seen that a total of 5 stages are involved, starting with the use of cold
water
, followed by the use of an injection well, a production well, a condenser, and
finally
a generator and a
turbine
. The first step of the process involves the pumping of cold
water
into an injection well, located at a depth of 4.5 kilometres. The
water
then
flows through the geothermal zone, where it comes into contact with hot rocks. In the following stage, the hot
water
is pumped up and directed towards the condenser. In the subsequent stage, it converts to steam which is transferred into the
turbine
. The generated steam is
then
guided into a
turbine
.
As a result
, mechanical energy is obtained from the steam.
This
mechanical energy is
further
converted into electrical energy in the next step. The
turbine
powers a generator.
Finally
, the electricity generated is transmitted through electric towers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, turbine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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