Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Taking
tour
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a tour
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guide
help
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to help
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to visit the tourist
places
is actually an effective method.I completely agree with
this
opinion
i
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I
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think
lot
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a lot
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of benefits we get from them. Even though we spend money, it is worth it. First of all,I believe that the
tour
guide
knows all the things about the
places
we want to visit
such
as resorts,
weather
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the weather
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in that place,Food
as well as
the famous tourist
places
and history behind that.
For instance
,If people want to go to Kerala,Which
is
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is also known
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also
knows as God's own country .Individuals are newcomers to that place,they
dont
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don't
know anything about the place.
However
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,However
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we have smart gadgets like mobile phones to know
weather
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the weather
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,Famous restaurants and
the
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apply
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information whatever we want.But,I think
by
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apply
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taking help from
tour
guides has
lot
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a lot
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of merits for tourists to make their trip memorable.
Secondly
, The visitors are newcomers
do
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who do
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not know anything about the customs and traditions
as well as
rules and regulations.
Unintenionally
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Unintentionally
tourists suppose
do
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to do
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the
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apply
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thing
that is
actually
a
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apply
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incorrect in that area
then
travellers
has
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have
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to face
lot
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a lot
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of problems on their own.For
this
kind of
problems
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problem
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actually
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,actually
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the
guide
helps.
In addition
, He told
everything
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us everything
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about the
places
and the things to do and not to do
as well as
he will instruct all the precautions before
the
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apply
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travelling like taking
a
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apply
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clothes
according
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toaccording
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,which type of shoes are better ,
The
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and The
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food .So,
To keep
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Keeping
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the
tour
guide
is the best option to have a safe journey.
To sum up
,I strongly believe that guides are very helpful to visit new
places
.Because, For the travellers the journey makes memorable,
comfortable
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and comfortable
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with no worries and Safety.
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