The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the average consumed
calories
in seven countries
including, the United States
, India, New Zealand, Somalia, China, Mexico, and Indonesia, in 2003,
United States
consuming nearly 3400 calories
had the highest average and just after that New Zealand was in second place by 3300 calories
while
The other six countries
were consuming significantly less amount of calories
.
Explicitly one can arrange them into three different categories regarding their average calorie consumption . The United States
and New Zealand were in the first category and right after them in second place there were Spain and Mexico. The third place consists of four countries
including China, India, Somalia, and Indonesia which are sorted correspondingly from the highest to the lowest calorie consumption in the category.
overall
, the United States
had the highest and, by contrast
, Indonesia, by intaking less than half of the average for the United States
and New Zeeland, had the lowest average calorie consumption among all the eight countries
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