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Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

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It is a debatable issue whether hard work and focus toward the goal make
people
 successful
whereas
, others opine that luck
also
 matters in some situations. I agree with the former statement which discusses in forthcoming paragraphs. On the one side, nothing is impossible with
the
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hard work so
people
 should focus on their goals and try to give 100
percent
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 to achieve something. There are more stories where many pupils get success even in their any period of age so, never
loss
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 hope as well.
For example
, the famous cricketer virat kholi was faced
tough
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 time
from
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last
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 2 years , he
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was unabled
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unabled
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enabled
unable
 to get
score
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from
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 his bat but he was determined toward his goal and did practice daily now, he get his form back and
has
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scored 100 in
last
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 match.
However
, it is true luck helps many folks to get success in their life. Even,
they
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 don't try hard to achieve something
but
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, they find a path or shortcut to manage the situation. Some
people
born
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are born
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 lucky with immense blessings like some
has
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god
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 gift of singing and dancing and so on.
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,
sachin
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 is one of the cricketers who is god gifted with super timing with
bat
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a bat
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 that's why
people
 ask him god of cricket. In conclusion, a lucky person manages to handle the obstacles of his path but it's not long-lasting sometimes, it losses the hand of a lucky person ,
therefore
, hard work is important to sharpen your skills and make you strong enough to handle every situation.
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