Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets, however others think its waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

In recent decades, becoming more popular among to countries make an extra afford to discover

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liveable planet. Individuals argue that

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allocate their resources to find

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life

instead

of investing cash

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bad issue. For them, our inhabitant has already big problems rather than looking out of the

world

.

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essay will be discussed both views and

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I will provide my stance

at the end

of the essay. On the one hand, thanks to

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an idea about

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, people can move to has a plummy quality more than on earth.

World

’s sources are limited for human

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, and they reduce day by day. Not only

humans

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go into space but

also

, they take spaces fund to use our habitat.

Moreover

, citizens understand more knowledge about their living area and

then

they can fix their problems easily way. To illustrate, humans compare and wise up water’s building blocks

as well as

they will be finished with the water problem in nature.

On the other hand

, our

world

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face to face serious

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. All

government

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try to take precautions because global warming is

crucial

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topic.

Instead

of exploring space, they allocate a budget

sustainable

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life in the

world

. Because humans will not find to live area except the

world

. They have already

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to live. All

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about

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topic

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environmental pollution.

Furthermore

,

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crisis is another problem. To give a clear example, a baby is dying to find not enough food every day in Africa.

Hence

,

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decide

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how to expend their materials for our planet. In conclusion,

someone’s believe

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that exploring space is a good development for everyone

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others believe all resources spend

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our

inhabitant

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inhabitants

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.

According to

my view, the

government

invest

equal

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both

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of

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side, they give

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chance

a

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better life

their

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citizens.