Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is a fact that nowadays, there are so many parks and farmland that have been changed into residential areas. In my view,
this
should be perceived as a negative trend for two main reasons.
Firstly
, most developers try to build some houses nearby the
city
because they think that it can make some advantages for the.
For instance
, they can easily earn more money in case people are interested in a house which is located in the
city
in order to get some facilities and access. Sadly, they do not realize that it can make a bad impact on the environment
such
as, there are fewer green places that can produce O2. To illustrate
this
condition, I will take Jakarta as an example. As the capital
city
of Indonesia, Jakarta is very crowded with houses area.
In addition
,
this
city
become one of the highest ranks in pollution. It is caused by there being fewer trees that can reduce pollution.
Besides
that, the price of land in Jakarta experienced a dramatic increase to almost 40-50 million per square metre.
Secondly
, the
city
will get troubles like incline the traffic jam. Most owners of houses have vehicles
for example
cars, and motorcycles that can rise congestion. As an implication of
this
, many people suffer and get drawbacks both material and non-material, like will get punishment from their office. To illustrates
this
condition, Surabaya, the capital province of east Java stated that, because most of the citizens live near the
city
, there will be more traffic spot. It can create a huge loss for the employee that their salary will be cut by the employers. In conclusion, I believe that new housing areas in the cities are negative development and will damage nature,
also
the public condition.
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