You are going to work in another city for a year. A friend who lives there offered to help you find a place to live. Write a letter to your friend:  Express your gratitude to him/her  Describe the area that you want to live in  Explain what type of accommodation you are looking for

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Dear Amber Good day! Hope everything goes well with you. I will want to thank you for helping me to find a place in the Netherlands. As you know I am going to Amsterdam in October, I will be appreciated it if you can assist me to look for a shared house which is under one thousand Europe per month. And the area should not be too far from the town, as I will like to work in the city.

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in the room is necessary as I don't like the space to be too dark. And a balcony is a plus, so

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can grow some plants. Looking forward to hearing from you and thanks again for everything. Best regard Mars

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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0Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

122 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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