The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The graph illustrates the amount spent on six consumer stuff in four European nations.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the British
people
lead on purchasing all given products among the other European countries.
Moreover
, The British
favour purchasing photographic film by spending nearly 180 thousand
pounds
sterling, while
the Germans are at least interested in buying such
goods by spending more than 140 thousand
pounds
. It is interesting to note that French individuals prefer acquiring toys, as well as
, Italian people
, spending nearly 160 thousand
pounds
sterling. Also
, buying personal stereos is as common as buying tennis racquets in the United Kingdom.
In addition
, perfumes are more favoured by British
people
than by French individuals. Italian people
not keen on purchasing CDs nearly as the Germans paying 150 Add a verb
arepeople
werepeople
thousand
pounds
sterling on average. While
British
individuals prefer to spend money on CDs taking first place over the other nations.Submitted by shansharova.assel on
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