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toward
Bank Zimbabwe suspended the MasterCard service with immediate effect.
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announcement was made barely a day after EcoCashsuspended its Mastercard service. Steward Bank clients are now required to
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pre-fund
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their accounts with actual US dollars and not bond notes.
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move comes
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the shortage of foreign currency particularly US dollars. Most banking institutions have now been forced to suspend the use of their Mastercards outside the country.
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, people can still use their MasterCards outside Zimbabwe if they
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prefer
with US dollars.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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