The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
cities
of population
has Add an article
the population
increase
from four Change the verb form
increased
countries
in 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, most of the countries
has
increased in these years. But, only the Philippines was reduced from Correct subject-verb agreement
have
the
1990 to 2010.
In the past years before 2020, Change the article
apply
the
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apply
Indonesia
and Malaysia’s population
from Add an article
the city
city
has Fix the agreement mistake
cities
increase
faster than Change the verb form
increased
other
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in other
countries
. The
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apply
Indonesia
has 10% population
live in city
in 1970, and Fix the agreement mistake
cities
the
Malaysia has about 30% Correct article usage
apply
population
in the city
, but in 2020 there have about 50% and 75% population
living in cities
from
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in
the
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apply
Indonesia
and Malaysia. Compare with them, the Philippine
and Thailand only rise to 45% and 30% in 2020 the Fix the agreement mistake
Philippines
population
living in the cities
from 31% and 19% in 1970.
Back to the future of the 2030 and 2040, the four countries
is
similar to each other and their Change the verb form
are
population
in the city
both are increasing so fast. For 2030 to 2040 the
Malaysia is Correct article usage
apply
top
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the top
one
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apply
population
in the graph, and the
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apply
Indonesia
is second,
the
third and fourth are Correct article usage
apply
Philippines
and Thailand.
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the Philippines
Therefore
the four countries
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countries'
country's
cities
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cities'
city's
population
will continue increasing in the future.Submitted by crystal1989.liu on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, population, countries, indonesia, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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