You have just come back from San Francisco. When you were there, your friend Mr Jackson gave you a great deal of help. Write a letter to Mr. Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help. In your letter: -Thank him for his help -Explain what you are impressed the most. -Invite him to visit you in your country.

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Dear Jackson, I hope you’re well. I’m just writing to thank you for your enthusiasm and for taking care of me when I was on my holiday at your place. It was the first time I visited

such

a lovely city. I appreciate that you sacrificed some annual leaves to take me around, and you even asked Jane for accompanying me shopping. I’m pleased to tell you that I enjoyed every minute, but I love the view of Golden Gate Bridge the most. I had read some articles and watched films about it, and it was emotional to see it in my eyes. The bridge was majestic and breathtaking but charming and romantic too. You said you would have a long vacation next January, right? I’d like to see you and Jane here

then

. That will be the lunar new year here in Vietnam, so you and your wife can experience traditional Tet, and I will bring you guys to some hot spots here. I’m sure you guys will have a great time. Help me to say thank you to Jane too and hope to see you guys

then

! Best regards, Maria

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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