More and more people are moving to cities to look for work. What are the problems does this cause? What are the possible solutions?

This

is

modern

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era, 70% of people are working whether male or female So most individuals are shifting to urban

areas

to look for jobs. Yours is attracting

on

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urban

areas

for employment.

This

paragraph discusses both sides. Let's

tostart

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begin, Now almost every Individual are doing the job for bread and butter, But the best salaries and jobs are available in metropolitan

cities

while

the rural area did not upgrade and there has no good source of employment

Although

, the salary average to less than in

cities

.

Moreover

, you moving to metropolis

cities

because of here

available

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of all types of Facilities and

modern

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lifestyle and they want

the

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freedom from their parents and they want successful on

own

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feet.

Additionally

, some youngster study at universities with

a higher scores

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and they passed higher education and courses at the biggest universities but when they search for work in nearby their

areas

such

as rural

areas

So they have not found the best jobs

according to

their studies and capability or skills that's the one of the

reason

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They moving to metropolitan

cities

for bright future and other best opportunities.

Nevertheless

, In the biggest

cities

very

advance

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villages

while

here many rural and country yard

areas

are too

backwards

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and there have people's mentality is so

backwards

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Thats why the new generation wants facilities and government should awareness of farmers for

advanced

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the advanced

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technique

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of farming so that they improve agriculture theme and youth aware to new machinery and farming technique

However

, they earn a good income.

For instance

,

cities

area are facing huge

crowd

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such

as traffic, in public places

as well as

facing many critical issues related to health. In conclusion, the government should awareness of people

such

as in villages and country yard

areas

So what they do works in rural

areas

,

Hence

, the new generation

aware

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of their area for new business ideas.