Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some people argued that protecting wild animals from their extinction is useless, rubbish for money and time. From my point of view, I completely disagree
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statement. A strong contradiction to
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perspective in
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To begin
with, the world is not
place
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a place
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for just human beings. To put it another way, we do not have any rights to
elimination
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of other
creature
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,
moreover
, there is nothing special in
this
century
for
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justify
this
argument. All nature parts
such
as
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humans, animals and plants are connected, influenced and interacted
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other which protects existing of them. To give a clear example, in Australia, they hunted wolves because they were feeding on
sheeps
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,
however
,
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were overstocked
as a result
, not having enough food, they
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died. In the second place, critters have many advantages and benefits to humanities.
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researchers have been discovering great remedies and drugs
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especially from wild animals.
For instance
, venom from cone-snail, which is
predatory
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a predatory
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sea snail, is now treating chronic pain, what is more, we are looking into
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the treatment
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of invasive cancers and Alzheimer's disease, which are untreatable conditions in
this
time, from wild creatures.
Furthermore
, many people's work and income consist
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undomesticated life
such
as
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archeologists
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, some photographers and even television show and magazine workers.
To conclude
, we have to support their living and
existing
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because they are
also
part of
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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which has to be balanced.
Moreover
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they have beneficial sides
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in
medical
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the medical
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field.
For
this
reason
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we have to keep
continueing
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continuing
protection of their lives in the future.
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