Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some people argued that protecting wild animals from their extinction is useless, rubbish for money and time. From my point of view, I completely disagree

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statement. A strong contradiction to

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view will be presented as I thoroughly examine

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perspective in

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essay.

To begin

with, the world is not

place

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a place

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for just human beings. To put it another way, we do not have any rights to

elimination

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the elimination

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of other

creature

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,

moreover

, there is nothing special in

this

century

for

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to

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justify

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argument. All nature parts

such

as

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humans, animals and plants are connected, influenced and interacted

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other which protects existing of them. To give a clear example, in Australia, they hunted wolves because they were feeding on

sheeps

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,

however

,

sheep's

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sheep

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were overstocked

as a result

, not having enough food, they

had

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died. In the second place, critters have many advantages and benefits to humanities.

Lately

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researchers have been discovering great remedies and drugs

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especially from wild animals.

For instance

, venom from cone-snail, which is

predatory

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sea snail, is now treating chronic pain, what is more, we are looking into

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the treatment

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of invasive cancers and Alzheimer's disease, which are untreatable conditions in

this

time, from wild creatures.

Furthermore

, many people's work and income consist

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of

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undomesticated life

such

as

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archeologists

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, some photographers and even television show and magazine workers.

To conclude

, we have to support their living and

existing

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because they are

also

part of

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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which has to be balanced.

Moreover

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they have beneficial sides

especially

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in

medical

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the medical

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field.

For

this

reason

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we have to keep

continueing

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continuing

protection of their lives in the future.