Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays some people argued that protecting wild animals from their extinction is useless, rubbish for money and time. From my point of view, I completely disagree
this
statement. A strong contradiction to Change preposition
with this
this
view will be presented as I thoroughly examine this
perspective in this
essay.
To begin
with, the world is not place
for just human beings. To put it another way, we do not have any rights to Add an article
a place
the place
elimination
of other Add an article
the elimination
creature
, Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
moreover
, there is nothing special in this
century for
justify Change preposition
to
this
argument. All nature parts such
as,
humans, animals and plants are connected, influenced and interacted Remove the comma
apply
each
other which protects existing of them. To give a clear example, in Australia, they hunted wolves because they were feeding on Change preposition
with each
sheeps
, Correct your spelling
sheep
however
, sheep's
were overstocked Change noun form
sheep
as a result
, not having enough food, they had
died.
In the second place, critters have many advantages and benefits to humanities. Unnecessary verb
apply
Lately
researchers have been discovering great remedies and drugs Add a comma
,Lately
from
especially from wild animals. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, venom from cone-snail, which is predatory
sea snail, is now treating chronic pain, what is more, we are looking into Correct article usage
a predatory
treatment
of invasive cancers and Alzheimer's disease, which are untreatable conditions in Add an article
the treatment
this
time, from wild creatures. Furthermore
, many people's work and income consist from
undomesticated life Change preposition
of
such
as,
Remove the comma
apply
archeologists
, some photographers and even television show and magazine workers.
Change the spelling
archaeologists
To conclude
, we have to support their living and existing
because they are Replace the word
existence
also
part of ecosystem
which has to be balanced. Add an article
the ecosystem
an ecosystem
Moreover
they have beneficial sides Add a comma
,Moreover
especially
in Add the comma(s)
,especially
medical
field. Add an article
the medical
For
this
reason
we have to keep Add a comma
,reason
continueing
protection of their lives in the future.Correct your spelling
continuing
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