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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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In our modern society, most
of
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people
 start their own new business
instead
 of working for employers. I think both of them have their own risk. and benefits. On the one hand, one of the reasons
people
 choose self-employment is to
work
 freely, meaning, when you are a workforce in the
company
 you have to
work
 almost 8 hours a day.
Additionally
, in your
company
 rivalry does not exist and
work
 pressure decreases because you are working by yourself, but
work
 pressure increases when you have no experience so you can not manage your enterprise.
For example
, you are an entrepreneur and 20 employees are working in your
company
 and you must pay a monthly salary to them
therefore
 you need to know about financial management and
also
 give them perks so that they become motivated for
work
.
On the other hand
, working for a
company
 and being to promoted entails strenuous effort But some companies may be indifferent to the efforts of their employees.
Furthermore
, some
people
 have a lot of talent and ability beyond their job position
therefore
 they are not seen but
this
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people
 can be recognized
their
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 talent and choose to start a new own
company
.
Additionally
, you must collaborate with another employee even if you do not like them.
To sum up
, if I had to choose between self-employment and working for a
company
, I would choose freelance
work
 because I feel it is more flexible and has more benefits.
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