Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both attitudes and give your opinion.

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Many
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are willing to experience new features, for
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, pay a visit to new places and try new types of food. Others ,
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, like their lives to be steady and they rather do
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that are known to them. I personally hold the idea that it is a necessity for human beings to experience new
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and
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will eventually end up in evolving humans. On the one hand, some
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prefer to live the same every day and believe that their life can be controlled in
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way.
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, they do not want to risk what they have obtained by experiencing new
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.
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, they are afraid of change and are not flexible.
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, elder
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prefer their constant life in which everything is the same as it was yesterday, so they lack flexibility in their lives.
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, many
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say that human being is an inquisitive
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and the tendency to try new
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is what has led to
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thriving over centuries.
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, trying new
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will prevent their lives from being dull and
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lead to
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wisdom and knowledge.
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, these new findings may change its path for good. Take
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example, the continent of America was first discovered by
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inquisitive person who was exploring the world for new opportunities. I believe it is in our instincts to be curious and we will get bored of doing the
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that we are familiar with,
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the risk might increase by experiencing new
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,
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, I think that it is necessary.
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, some
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may not try new
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because they want their usual life to be preserved and take no chance of risking it by trying new
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.
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, others believe that experiencing new
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is one of
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the humans
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humans
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key features and
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is inborn,
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, it may lead to finding new
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and places which were unbeknown to humans before, so it is mandatory to be inquisitive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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