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Write a bout the most popular sport in your country.what are the reason behind it's popularity ?

#bout #sport #country #reason #popularity
The popularity of
football
 is hard to ignore in the world .
Football
 is the most popular sport in my country as it's in many other countries.It is played between two
team
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 each of them has 11 players. For many
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reasons
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reason
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football
 is an interesting
game
 among
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the nation
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nation
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. To mark on, the primary reason
of
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football's
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football
 is popularity is that it can be played everywhere .whenever you find a space which is wide and open you can start a
game
. The second one is that it doesn't
needs
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 any special equipment .A ball and two
goalpost
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 are quite enough. Generally speaking , the
simplecity
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simplicity
 and accessibility of
football
game
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games
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 make
pepole
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people
 follow
this
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these games
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game
in
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apply
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all over the world.
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