Why do some people prefer to live in big cities ? What problems do people usually face when the live in big cities ?

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It is a fact that nowadays many people tend to live in big
cities
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. What makes big
cities
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the better places to live is that they have easy access to diverse facilities ,
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as ; job opportunities ,the best university,
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more money ,transportation and entertainment facilities .
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, in big
cities
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, you are surrounded
with
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more job
opportunites
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opportunities
so you can find a better job with
high
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salary
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by
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living in rural areas.
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, living in megacities has their own drawbacks ,
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, many people aren't aware of the negative aspects.There are several issues in big
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which are a domino effect on population.
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as; air
pollution
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, noise
pollution
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,and traffic
jam
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.it's obvious the most significant one is air
pollution
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.producing many vehicles and increasing daily commuting are the main
reason
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of
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air
pollution
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.
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all
begin
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,
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when many
dowellers
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dwellers
jewellers
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their own car
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of public transportation. So , many cars in the street cause
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high rate of carbon footprint and
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we are faced with traffic jams every day. All in all, living in big
cities
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has many benefits and negative aspects . I personally think everyone has their own opinion .
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task response
Use a clear structure with introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Make sure to address all aspects of the topic in a balanced way.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the introduction and conclusion to provide a clearer and more engaging framework for the essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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