some people believe that artefacts from foreign countries should always be returned to their place of origin while others believe important artefacts should remain whether they can be best studied and look after Discus both points of view, and give your opinion

Nowadays, a myriad of

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are exhibited in the

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of a number of

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while

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they are actually from

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others. Talking about

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issue, many opinions state

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should be delivered back to where they originate

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,

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others think they should be kept in the aforementioned

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for

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purposes.

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in fact, a great deal of

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are saved professionally in famous

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, I suppose that

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should be returned to their

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.

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artefacts

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of

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have a similar story. Their

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was a colony of a developed country and

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from there travelled to the colony and discover them. Following that, they were brought to the developed country and exhibited in famous

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to research and secure.

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story has a message that

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, the

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of

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did not have advanced science, including

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, which was the opposite

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where they are.

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, it was more beneficial for the scientific community, especially for

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and historians, to deliver

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from their

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.

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,

this

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story is a part of the past and it can be not

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appropriate

in the contemporary period. At present,

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science, including

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in former colonies, has developed remarkably.

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not only the result of the self-attempts of these

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but

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of the assistance from developed

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. Because of

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development, it seems not reasonable to keep

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in the

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of former colonial empires.

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,

artefacts

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should be brought back to their

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.

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, developing

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need to have more footage to decipher the mysteries of their histories and

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can be one

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answers.

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,

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which exhibit the antiques from

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others should deliver

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. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that plenty of

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are secured by specialists in many

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where they do not originate

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, they should be back to their

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because of the scientific development and

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purposes there.