some people believe that artefacts from foreign countries should always be returned to their place of origin while others believe important artefacts should remain whether they can be best studied and look after Discus both points of view, and give your opinion

Nowadays, a myriad of

artefacts

are exhibited in the

museums

of a number of

countries

while

they are actually from

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others. Talking about

this

issue, many opinions state

artefacts

should be delivered back to where they originate

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,

while

others think they should be kept in the aforementioned

museums

for

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purposes.

Although

in fact, a great deal of

artefacts

are saved professionally in famous

museums

, I suppose that

artefacts

should be returned to their

homeland

.

To begin

with, plenty

artefacts

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have a similar story. Their

homeland

was a colony of a developed country and

archeologists

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from there travelled to the colony and discover them. Following that, they were brought to the developed country and exhibited in famous

museums

to research and secure.

This

story has a message that

initially

, the

homeland

of

artefacts

did not have advanced science, including

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, which was the opposite

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where they are.

Therefore

, it was more beneficial for the scientific community, especially for

archeologists

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and historians, to deliver

artefacts

from their

homeland

.

Nevertheless

,

this

story is a part of the past and it can be not

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appropriate

in the contemporary period. At present,

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science, including

archeology

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in former colonies, has developed remarkably.

That is

not only the result of the self-attempts of these

countries

but

also

of the assistance from developed

countries

. Because of

this

development, it seems not reasonable to keep

artefacts

in the

museums

of former colonial empires.

Therefore

,

artefacts

should be brought back to their

homeland

.

Furthermore

, developing

countries

need to have more footage to decipher the mysteries of their histories and

artefacts

can be one

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answers.

Hence

,

countries

which exhibit the antiques from

the

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others should deliver

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. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that plenty of

artefacts

are secured by specialists in many

countries

where they do not originate

in

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, they should be back to their

homeland

because of the scientific development and

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purposes there.