You are a commuter. One morning on your way to work you suddenly fell ill and lost your consciousness. One gentleman on the same bus sent you to a hospital. Write a letter to the company where the gentleman works to extend your gratefulness. In your letter: - Introduce who you are, - Describe what happened, - Suggest how you would like to thank him.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the kind action your staff member, Mr Kim, the teller of your bank, did to me
last
Monday. I am Maria Do, a full-time cashier at Walmart in Kingston. I live in Odessa, so I take the 611 bus to and from work on a daily basis.
Last
Monday morning around 8.00, I was on the bus when my asthma came. I felt dizzy, hard to breathe and
then
came to a full sleep. When I woke up, I saw myself in Hotel Dieu hospital, and the nurse told me that the man who wore your bank’s uniform sent me here. There had been a few passengers on the bus that morning including some women and that gentleman, so I remember him well. I had been able to see his name and title on his insignia before the accident. I am grateful to Mr Kim for his kindness. To show my gratitude, I enclose a Walmart gift card in the envelope and hope that you could transfer it to him. Thank you for your help. I am proud of your company for having
such
a good employee. Yours faithfully, Maria Do
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