In the modern world, most young people do not take any notice of saving money daily.
Also
, they waste more Linking Words
time
on shopping which some people are concerned about. I totally agree that Use synonyms
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an enormous amount of Verb problem
spending
time
in malls causes many negative aspects that affect those young folk and the whole of society.
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Firstly
, constructing shopping malls to encourage the community to buy things can contribute to a culture of materialism. In the trend of modernization, they become materialistic and value material things above other important things Linking Words
such
as health, relationships, and meaningful experiences. Linking Words
For example
, a young lady who spends a lot of Linking Words
time
in a shopping centre will feel pressure to keep up with the latest Use synonyms
fashion
trends and consumer products, Use synonyms
although
it is unnecessary. Because we Linking Words
consume
most of our Verb problem
spend
time
at the mall, Use synonyms
so
we do not have enough Rephrase
apply
time
for family, friends and Use synonyms
for
our health.
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Moreover
, Linking Words
due to
over-shopping, the environment and employees are getting worse. Because of the high demand of customers at the shopping centre, factories have to release more toxins into the environment Linking Words
as well as
force workers to work to meet market demand. Linking Words
For instance
, fast Linking Words
fashion
was born to meet the need to pursue cheap Use synonyms
fashion
trends. Use synonyms
Besides
the great economic benefits, fast Linking Words
fashion
brands have released a lot of non-biodegradable substances that increase the greenhouse effect. Use synonyms
Moreover
, many wage workers have been subjected to violence and abuse Linking Words
such
as not being allowed to eat to produce huge amounts of clothing.
In conclusion, youngsters should use their day more wisely. Spending too much Linking Words
time
at shopping plazas can negatively affect their behaviour and society.Use synonyms
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