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In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is a fact that more and more
people
 around the world after finishing high education choose to live with their
parents
 rather than alone.
Moreover
, some
people
 continue to live with
parents
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their parents
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 even after they have found a job. In
this
essay
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 I will describe
pros
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the pros
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 and cons and give my opinion .
To begin
 with, there are some advantages in
this
 situation.
Firstly
, today's life is very expensive and it is hard for young specialists to deal with all costs,
such
 as food, rent and others.So, it is easier to live
together with
 relatives.
Secondly
,
while
 living with
parents
 young
people
 could spend more time working and improving their skills rather than
do
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doing
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 housework ,
such
 as cooking , washing clothes ,
cleaning
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and cleaning
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 the house.
While
 living together,
parents
 can help them with that things.
On the other hand
, there are some significant disadvantages.
For instance
, personal life. It will be harder to have a party, invite friends or build relationships.
However
 , living with
parents
 it is important to respect their rules and needs. Different
people
 have different habits and needs.
Moreover
 , it is important
to
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 young
people
 to learn how to be independent and deal with their problems without their
some
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apply
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help, to make their own families in the future .
To conclude
,
undoubthere
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undoubted
 are advantages
living
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to living
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together with
parents
 ,
such
 as costs and help, but I
thing
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think
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 that
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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outweight
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outweigh
 the advantages. It is important for young
people
 to be independent and deal with their problems without their
parents
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parent's
parents'
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 help.
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