The English Department has decided to hold a speech contest in late December, but your classmates find that it is too near the final examination. Write to the Dean of the department. In your letter: - Introduce yourself, - Explain the problem, - Suggest a change of the time.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing with regard to the speech contest which will be held in December by your department. My name is Maria Do, a student of MBA 11. I am pleased to inform you that all of my classmates are interested and excited about the contest, and we intend to participate in it.

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, there is a timing conflict here. We will work on our thesis in the following six months, and the final defence will come in someday in January. The thesis is a hard job, and we may be exhausted and overwhelmed by it.

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, we will not be able to have time for the speech which

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requires proper preparation. On behalf of all my class, I would suggest you postpone the competition until March so that we can thoroughly prepare and enjoy it. I hope that you can address our concerns as soon as possible. We look forward to your decision. Yours sincerely, Maria Do

mariatuyet82Fri Jun 09 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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